Wednesday, September 19, 2007

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The crickets’ haze heard and resounding
On that moonless night inside the cabin
While the countryside is celebrating
Here, she got a pillow, subbing, forbidden
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Edgar Eslit
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Marvin Brato 19 September 2007

Good advice for ladies who becom victims of love.... a love thought to be true but alas some guys only use it as bait to fool many gals! . However, there are women also who like to be victimized...maybe they are in heat! Good poetry Edgar. Thanks for sharing, worth the 10.

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