Thursday, November 7, 2013

Saving A Soldier Comments

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I found him in mud colored red by the blood
Breathing but weak not able to speak
Surrounded by eerie lights of battle out of sight
He shook like a leaf I felt his grief
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John Shea
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2013

An aweinspiring touching poem.! I hate all war! Hey awesome rhyme scheme, new type.

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John Shea 12 November 2013

we are tools of love and life so learn from our grief and strife.

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John Shea 12 November 2013

I cry as I wrote this.....I think it should stop as we speak...the meek shall inherit the earth..enough said.

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John Shea 12 November 2013

I bow my head and pray to god to relieve my life of this atrocity called war. Love for one another is the answer.

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John Shea 12 November 2013

This poem is about what our veterans are going through...what are you going through?

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Noreen Carden 08 November 2013

Hello john a very moving poem really great read well done

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