There was yelling everywhere, 
gunshots, screams and pleads.
The gun pointed at me, 
you saved my life.
                
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A nice poem, could use a little more to become even better! : D
Very nice poem... some repetition, but art none the less
Very beautiful imagery and flow. I enjoyed your wonderful poetry
...this actually made me cry. Maybe I'm in a crying mood but...ouch.
This moment of your life, or from your interpretation of someone else's, is sensitively portrayed. Well done!
A lovely heartfelt poem with well written lines. Thanks for sharing!

 
                     
                
This poem is portrayed from the book Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Picolut. It is one of my all-time favourite books to read. The book helped me create this poem in a way as if I was there, I found it easy to communicate with the characters because it is such an easy book to communicate with. I suggest reading this book. It is so easy to read, a sad book, death is involved unfortunately. Place yourself into the characters shoes so you can understand the book and the emotions. Thank you all for the kind comments and improvements, please message me if you have any questions or anything that may come to mind for you. Yours, Scarlet Outlaw