Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Saved My Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

There was yelling everywhere,
gunshots, screams and pleads.
The gun pointed at me,
you saved my life.
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Scarlett Outlaw
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Scarlett Outlaw 11 August 2013

This poem is portrayed from the book Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Picolut. It is one of my all-time favourite books to read. The book helped me create this poem in a way as if I was there, I found it easy to communicate with the characters because it is such an easy book to communicate with. I suggest reading this book. It is so easy to read, a sad book, death is involved unfortunately. Place yourself into the characters shoes so you can understand the book and the emotions. Thank you all for the kind comments and improvements, please message me if you have any questions or anything that may come to mind for you. Yours, Scarlet Outlaw

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Daniel Warner 28 November 2012

Gentle yet enthusiastic. Very warming.

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Kanav Justa 28 November 2012

nice poem, , , with emotions, , ,

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Anthony Han 17 November 2012

A nice poem, could use a little more to become even better! : D

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Brandon Mcconnell 16 November 2012

Very nice poem... some repetition, but art none the less

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Asif Andalib 15 November 2012

Very beautiful imagery and flow. I enjoyed your wonderful poetry

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Jerry C 15 November 2012

...this actually made me cry. Maybe I'm in a crying mood but...ouch.

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Maggie Munro 15 November 2012

This moment of your life, or from your interpretation of someone else's, is sensitively portrayed. Well done!

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Hazel Durham 14 November 2012

A lovely heartfelt poem with well written lines. Thanks for sharing!

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Vijay Sai R 14 November 2012

a touching poem...full of emotions

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