Sunday, August 14, 2005

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For being here and staying
when i felt abandoned, even by my own heart
Let me thank you now
After all the years I held my breath
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Gainor Ventresco
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Max Reif 01 September 2005

Your gratitude comes through very strongly, and is really brought home completely in the last line.

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Uriah Hamilton 15 August 2005

A lovely inspiring poem. To a special friend? To God? No matter, I like it.

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Gainor Ventresco

Gainor Ventresco

Boston, Mass
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