Monday, June 15, 2009

Save Your Tears Comments

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I still remember that night,
the night i made a vow,
a vow not to cry
until i saw you crying beside me.
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Daichi Nomura
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Afzal Shauq 25 June 2009

And since that night, the worst night of my life, the night you had abandoned me, I have never cried. good flow in your poetry.. interesting and specially the above stanza is impressive and meaningful..liked your your poem..its well written..10++++++++

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