Tuesday, September 5, 2017

Save The Princess From The Wolves! Hearken To The Call! Comments

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My muse demands study in all her ways to know
Risk the flames that bellow and cause the mind to glow
Then with heart afire and lettered in this pain
Truth and love's poetic voice surely will obtain.
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Captain Cur
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Seamus O Brian 29 January 2018

Dropped in briefly to say Hello. Realized I had not read this one. Another terrific piece, good Captain; so glad I stopped by. :)

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2017

When muse rooted on your core basement, you gotta keep it deep so you could grab all what it offers to you Captain...

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Captain Cur 06 September 2017

This is true, Soul. What is deep inside of us needs to see the light of day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

Muse demands to have study in every sequence of imagery and expression basing on observation. We obtain truth and love in poetic attitude and expression. Lines ended with false rhymes do not sustain and lines ended with truth sustains more. We write in trust and trust exist in writing. Very neatly drafted poem is shared here is interesting...10

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Captain Cur 06 September 2017

Thank you Kumarmani, you have sumed up the poem very well.

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Pratik Rajani 05 September 2017

nice one like it you may like my poem sun and planet.

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Captain Cur 05 September 2017

Pratik, thank for for taking the time to comment on this poem.

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