Monday, June 22, 2009

Save The Planet! Comments

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Wanna cut down that tree?
You have to pay a fee
Do you know your killing our planet
You don't even have to plan it
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Deborah Cromer 03 July 2009

Mother Earth. Your message is a good one.3rd line down in your poem, should be you're killing our planet. Sorry, I'm editing again. But! I am reading your poetry! I only tell you about a word that can be corrected, only to add to your poem. You as a writer want your poem to be all it can be, right? Smiles! :) DC

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Alex Lewis 24 June 2009

Nice meaning throughout. I have written a similar poem and like yours better.

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