Monday, September 21, 2015

Save Our Souls Comments

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If You can tear up the clouds
With a thunder in Your firm hands,
Guiding them to drizzle umpteen drops of purity
On greenish carpet of earthly softness,
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Sanjukta Nag
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2015

So that, our murky souls can reach the righteousness Through your white luminous innocence..........of course. It is an intensive poem so wisely and aptly penned. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Liza Sudina 21 September 2015

Why don’t You destroy the aggression? - my pastor answerd ^ because God gives a FREE WILL and is very patient. but then - will punish.

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Kelly Kurt 21 September 2015

There are a few possible answers. None are satisfying. It is up to us to correct our failures as a race

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M Asim Nehal 21 September 2015

Every time fear spreads its wings around us Our lips mumble Your name and eyes look for Your signs................Wonderful lines. Since life is a test, a struggle to fight against all odds we have tools like Faith, hope, prayers and patience......Very few have Heart like poets, it pains and bleeds and gets affected by the surroundings..........You nailed it SN....Loved it.

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