Monday, June 18, 2007

Save Me A Good Seat Comments

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I know you're ready to go,
your bags have been packed for years.
I've watched you, twiddling your thumbs,
anxiously awaiting departure.
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Amanda Lukas
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Tom J. Mariani 24 November 2007

'anxiously awaiting departure' Elegantly put. For anyone who has sat with someone through hospice, your words refelct the peaceful acceptance. I tried to address the struggle some have with this in 'Looking for Encouragement In ICU.' Tom

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Andre Yates 22 June 2007

You are amazing person... Through all your poems I can tell you have a good heart! This is really touching poem...

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Marilyn Lott 18 June 2007

Kind of sad. A lot more to the story for sure! But, you put it very well. Marilyn

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Francesca Johnson 18 June 2007

Amanda, this is a brilliant read, thought-provoking, poignant, deep. Top marks. Love, Fran xx

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