Thursday, June 29, 2006

Save Me.. Comments

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On the sidewalk, I stood alone
And saw her walk across the road,
I viewed their arms entangled
And homewards I strode,
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AMyth Kulkarni
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Nalini Hebbar 29 June 2006

aakash...thats nice... well written poetry...enjoyed it...keep writing...welcome to PH, hope you have a great time here...nalini...(my son is aakash too)

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P K 29 June 2006

Wow what a poem! You have expressed your feelings so beautifully! I liked the 4 lines as 'As I look in the dark sky The clashes one hears, Raindrops wet my face And become one with my tears.' Keep it up

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Melissa Broomhead 29 June 2006

wow......... i can really relate i no exactly how it feels this is a great poem wonderful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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