Thursday, September 8, 2005

Save Me... Comments

Rating: 4.5

save me...
piece of papers, empty pages..
blue ink, heart adorer..
and last, there behind the bars..
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hazem al jaber
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Keep letting it out and you need no saving! First three lines express what many of us think, I reckon. Could I suggest a spell-check might be useful? When the pen billows on fast as it so shiningly does with you these things can go astray!

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