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Hi Rini, Your rejoinder to my comment: As a mother YOU are the better judge. But, I would love to consider all the terrestrial turbulations as helpless cries of agony of a wounded mother, not her anger. Regards -unnikrishnan

Part 2 As tsunami, cyclones, earthquakes and flood Hear my cry, save your mother Before I swipe you from earth. Should we have a relook here? Is it not the helplessness of mother earth, Her agonies and heart-aches that is manifested as tsunamis etc.? A mother can not by so angry and ferocious to destroy her children. The following lines stand out, and do not gel with the mood of the poem: : : You made me ferocious, : : You will see my anger: : Can you make a revisit?

Hi Rini, The helpless cry of Mother Earth brought out most skillfully in the poem. But, your lines, You wiped out all the trees, Made me weary and dry No more I can quench your thrist You made me ferocious, You will see my anger (contd..)

Rays of hope kissing the heart, smiling clouds, showered blessings, Brutally destroyed my winsome beauty Made me weary and dry, sunami, cyclones, earthquakes and flood a cry tot he human kind.. do not destroy what God has given in this beautiful nature. Thank you. You got into the mind of nature, into the mind of earth …. Thank you dear poetess. tony

The ruthless exploitation of Mother Nature by us is beautifully focussed in your lovely stanzas.....

A true Poem about Nature.. how we are ruining the Beauty of Earth.. and the whole system while all the Nature's elements are trying their best (since ages) to keep a beautiful and balanced Earth! ! well expressed thoughts of Nature awareness! 10++!

Hear my cry! ! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Lovely rendition for such a worthy cause. Thanks for expressing this point.

Nicely portrayed continuous exploitation of earth.10