Save Me! Comments

Nice really depicts emotion

as I am legless and wingless In front of the stare of the world Top stuff

as I am legless and wingless In front of the stair of the world! ! ! U ar good!

Where i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.

Ehrte i'm alone and dying alive. Nice piece of work.

This prayer, I am sure has gone up to the Heavens! It has the strength and poignancy to melt even a rock hearted brute! Then think of God who is Mercy Immaculate..... He will wrap you so endearingly in His robe and hold you closer to His bosom! Glad to see you back Vipins!

To encounter misfortune as a sojourner in a strange place is greatly despairing, as the heart turns to God, its only Help - seeking pity with a remorseful plea, knowing that the time for an inevitable change is come. Deep and poignant with powerful message.

'And I'm drowning to a bottomless abyss in that sea of tears, By swallowing the salinity of sin.' I have no words to express..... I just remember John Keats eternal poetic line 'If he is poet, sure a love too! A can see profound pall of gloom sprinkled in some of your love poems. I think you are a genuine lover. But I am sure that you have a swallowed the dictionary.......There is passion and desire in your poems.... Outstanding write... Give you a royal treat.....

An exceptional use of language that is always a delight to read. A very visual poem that gives a poignant point.

This is an amazing poem, it describes perfectly the way humans wait for love to come and save them and when it does we will willingly be bound to them for all of time. I love it.

Hmm, wow! This verse is so so beautiful.You're one of the best griots that i have ever read their works.I admire your style, the way your thoughts flow in the lines & your economy but simplicity of words.The poem is philosophical as well as theological.It calls on the Rissing Sun to reflect His effulgence of elegence on the map[perhaps, destiny]of the poet's persona.It's an urgent need cos the persona has alread submitted himself or herself to be consoled(see lines 1-10) .The poem is about general salvation of humanity because we're temporal tenants in the world.I rate high your imageries & diction. Appropriateness is your key here.Well written & award-winning! Kudos!

wow...very nice......... you could be famous one day.... keep up the good work.

wow...very nice......... you could be famous one day.... keep up the good work. :)

Sir VIPINS You such a good writter, everytime i read a poem of yours i feel a spark, Well Done Brother

Lave my sin wholly. I'll be your Slave for ever. Great lines and I like it alot All the best for your great writing work

Beautiful poem i liked it alot

The passion that is palpable in this poem is very poetically expressed

wow, its so beautiful! nice poem, i like how it sounds and has a lot of emotion great job ^^

A nice poem in nice words. Fully dedicated to love. Good work.

this is beautiful. though life is short, you cant help having your heart become the slave to another. love it <3