Friday, January 11, 2008

Savage Seduction Comments

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Rapacious ghost within,
ravening dreams,
it was a barbaric meeting.
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Melissa Hurst
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Natasha Ashwe 11 January 2008

I loved the title of your poem and was drawn to it at once. Read through and grew sombre. Great description, words make one flick through flash cards of the scene. And the story leaves emotion behind when it's through. Thanks for sharing! [was so anticipating a romantic lustful piece! Will read more poems by Melissa Hurst.

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