Thursday, January 28, 2016

Saudade (Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cherries in full bloom.
Petals falling one by one.
No time to wither.
Feelings have flittered away.
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C.D. Sinex
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Souren Mondal 28 January 2016

I was really interest in reading your poem when I saw its title, and I must say I am not a least bit disappointed. You captured the 'saudade' to near perfection and the choice of your poetic form being a tanka is all the more appropriate. Beautifully written, thank you for sharing...

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Cd Sinex 28 January 2016

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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