Satyawati -27 Comments

Powerfully written and powerfully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

What? Refused by him, I lost all hopes / Resigned to the inevitable / I confined myself to the antapura / No more confident to face the world. - - - - ] well, I thought she had more fight in her than to give up.... hmmm... maybe she is just charging her batteries so to speak... or maybe fate is about to step in and change his mind. Cliff-hangers, cliff hangers! ! ! 10

A childless man shall not attain heavenly abode, interesting, it's new information to me. Well penned . Thanks for this poem