Satyawati -23 Comments

stark imagery in this epic, well framed in my view 5/5

Powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Oh, my story has turned so very sad. Truth has a bad habit of having a dark and cruel side. But I will travel through this darkness to what I hope is a sunlit ending. Tis the way of tales to have beauty, trial, villains, and heroes who someday win the day. 10+++++++++++++++++++

Very well written. I enjoyed reading this piece where abduction of the princess takes place. His fierce arrows quelled the army Of Kaashi, known for its numbers, Gallantry and modern weapons, Like wild fire burning down a forest.

Amazing poem.. Well penned on abduction of princess of Kashi. Bowing down to the power of abductor to whom they will b married

It's such a captivating read! I'm looking forward to the next parts.

In this episode Satyawati-23, dear ES, you have hauntingly inscribed the abduction of princess of Kashi, the bride, for not inviting Vichitravirya, the brother of Devabrata for the swayamvara telling fisherman. Devabrata alias Bhisma taught the army of Kashi a good lesson through his gallantry and modern weapons. Enjoable topic.Thanks for sharing.