Satyawati -17 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -17

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17. The Reign

It rained copiously in Shravan
Sun shined in the summer months
Crops were good and people happy
The gods were on my side.

Devabrata was always by my side
Helping me to run the government
Had raised and trained the army
So nobody dared to test our borders.

He took care of my sons' education
In politics, rajatantra and governance
Their training in warfare and weaponry
Their grooming as princes and rulers.

There were kings growing restless
At our strength and prosperity
Acceptance among our peers
And growing status and influence.

But before the might of our army,
Its renowned commander
The great warrior Devabrata
Not many dared to raise their heads.


Devabrata loved to live in peace
Live and let live was his policy

Even with sworn enemies, never fought
A war, unless we were attacked.

Those who challenged our borders
Succumbed to the might of our army
Ended up as our protectorates
Paying us ransom or simply annexed.

I was the proud queen of Hastinapura
More proud as mother of Devabrata
Revered by kings and princes
I enjoyed the fruit of success.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Under Queen Satyawati and Prince Devabrata, Hastinapura expands its status and borders.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 18 April 2018

I was the proud queen of Hastinapura / More proud as mother of Devabrata / Revered by kings and princes / I enjoyed the fruit of success. - - - Wny do I get the feeling bad weather is approaching the Queen and the Prince?

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Hi Susie, Are you a doomsday advocate or what? Please read on. All your anxieties shall be answered.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 January 2018

Ever So Beautiful Told! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2018

Thank you Becca

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

Queen Satyawati reigned Hastinapura with the leadership and help of Devabrata alias Bhisma and expands the ststus and borders of it. Devabrata took care of Satyawati's sons and gave them training on weaponry. Dear ES, you have nicely depicted these facts in this episode. Interesting write. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 November 2017

Thank you Kumar Sahab. Your words give me the energy to proceed with the series.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Beautiful coordination of the facts said and unsaid in the original epic. Thanks Unnikrishanji for the nice sharing. 10+++ for it. Subhas

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 November 2017

Thank you Sir. Please continue to guide me...

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Rini Shibu 17 November 2017

Excellent piece Unnikrishnan, Sathyawathi as successful queen and proud mother, Devabatra behind her success.. Nice poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 November 2017

This is actually the making of Bhisma... I will post the next part very shortly.. Thank you Rini.

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PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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