Satyawati -16 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -16

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16. The Queen

The funeral rites were performed
By Devabrata with my sons in toe.
Santanu's ashes were consigned
To the holy waters of the Ganga.

The national mourning was over
I asked Devabrata to take charge
Of the nation, governance, as king.
I was in tears, he refused again.

"Mother, I have made the pledge
Not at your instance, you know well.
Sure, it was on my own volition;
Till end, I shall live for the nation.

The decision, you may think
Is severe and harsh on me,
But we should have no discord
In the ruling family. So I must.

Interest of the nation comes first!
Mother, I have to keep my word
Nothing in the world can change
My decision. I'd die before I do.

Now the throne is yours
I shall run the government
As you direct. I will wield
Arms to protect her borders.

A minister, if you desire
The commander, if need be.
I shall be the servant of the nation
But never shall I breach my oath.

Sure, the children are small
But in time, they will grow tall
May I arrange for your coronation
To you looks forward the nation.

Monday, November 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: coronation day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The next turn in her life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 18 April 2018

Life has so many unexpected turnings- may we weather them and make good of them! 10++++++++++++++ loving this story

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Hi Susie The turns that life takes, who can predict!

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Rebecca Navarre 18 January 2018

Ever So Heart Moving! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Penned Shared! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 January 2018

Thank you Becca.

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Rini Shibu 14 November 2017

An unexpected turn in sathyawathi's life, Devabatra very firm in his discision and his love toward a mother and siblings well penned.. Looking forward for the queens days

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2017

Thank you Rini. I shall post the next part very soon...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2017

Comment by Kumarmani Mahakul Part - 3 - Now the throne is yours I shall run the government As you direct. I will wield Arms to protect her borders. A minister, if you desire The commander, if need be. I shall be the servant of the nation But never shall I breach my oath. Interesting expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 November 2017

Kumar Sir, We have seen described in Mahabharat, how Bhisma tried to defend the nation; how he fought the silliest of battles, for the flimsiest of reasons, on the side of Duryodhana. Thus, keeping his word. (... pl see part 2)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2017

Comment by Kumarmani Mahakul Part - 2 - is revealed and this has been portrayed nicely and touchingly by you dear ES. Though Devabrata didn't take the charge yet he honestly said he would run the government as per the the advice and direction of Satyawati. You have hauntingly inscribed this here. I would like to quote some lines....

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 November 2017

Part 2: Bhisma did this, although he was with the Pandavas in his heart; he knew well that they were righteous. Still, he did fight for the Kauravas..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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