Satyawati -14 Comments

Great depiction of character of Satyawati...loved this poem

Very Heart Warming! ! ! ! ! And Beautifully Sown! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Oh, dear. I know there will be a plot twist coming. A story is propelled forward by disaster and heartbreaks. I shudder to turn the page in this epic poem... but I will because you have put a spell on me with this story! ! !

Quite a satisfactory creation, more than Chitrangad for Shantanu, this poem is so fast covering almost a decade from the Mahabharata regime. I wished you were a bit slow, I mean a bit more narrating. So that we could get the K.M. Munshi taste from the episodes. 10++++ for the poem shared.

Lovely story.. Acceptable of sathyawathi as queen and the love of king towards her, the birth of two kids and overall the love of devabatra towards siblings so nicely quoted by your poetic expression. Huge 10

In this episode you have narrated about how Satyawati became queen and the birth of Chitrangad and Vichitravirya captivatingly. Let some lines be quoted here...... Initial sarcasm of the servants about Fisherwoman feigning as queen Gave way for respect and reverence For my conduct in just a few days. Devabrata gave me all the respect Due to a mother and the queen. Nobody noticed how the time passed I gave birth to two sons in so many years. Chitrangad was just one year old When Vichitravirya was born. Our hearts were filled with joy Seeing how Devabrata loved them. Thanks for sharing.