Satyawati -10 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -10

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10. The Body

Another day is another lesson.

That evening, we had a visitor
A Special one, to me a suitor!
Maharaja Santanu of Hastinapura
The ruler of even our remote hamlet.

He had seen me bathing in the river
Followed me to the forest
Where I spent my day in penance
Or recited the scripts I knew.

So, now my body has another suitor.

Santanu was polite; He could
Take me by force if he so desired.
But he appealed to my father
For my hand in marriage.


Unsure of my response
Father did not consent the king.
"I need time", he said
"to discuss with her and the elders."

For a poor fisherwoman,
It was a great honour
To be asked in marriage
By the king of Hastinapura.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Here Satyawati's life takes a new turn.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 December 2018

The marriage proposal by Maharaja Santanu of Hastinapura to a poor fisherwoman for his daughter, Satyawati's hand in marriage has been astutely and hauntingly inscribed here. I cite..For a poor fisherwoman, / It was a great honour / To be asked in marriage / By the king of Hastinapura. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 December 2018

This marriage of Emperor Santanu with Satyawati is the very beginning of the saga called Mahabharata

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Susan Williams 04 January 2018

WoW! A poor fisherman doesn't immediately jump up and down in joy when a king asks for his daughter's hand in marriage? He is a very brave fisherman and treasures his daughter sooooooooooooooo very much. Can't wait to read the next installment! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Hi Susie, The answer is simple. Please see what Satyawati says. She does not acknowledge that she has another suitor. She says, : : now my body has another suitor: : . Her father already knows her well.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2017

If Love Is In Her Heart Here...Ever So Joyous! ! ! ! ! Hope She Finds Deep Happiness Here... Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! ! ! ....Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! :)

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Hi Becca, Deeply obliged for your time and the marvellous post.

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Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Great turn in sathyawathi's life and an end her suffering. Nice to read

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2017

Thank you for continuing with my series..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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