Friday, October 20, 2017

Satyawati -08 Comments

Rating: 5.0

8. The Vyaasa
Memories of my little Krishna
Haunted me all night and day
However did I try to keep them away;
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Susan Williams 18 April 2018

Oh my friend... beneath the surface of those lines lies the yearning heart of a mother for her wise little boy because a boy always needs the soft touch of a mother's hand....10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Very nice to see you on ph again. Your new poem is wonderful. Thank you Susan for taking time to revisit this series and offering such comments of appreciation. Obliged.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2017

Very Beautifully Sewn! ! ! ! ! Very Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 April 2018

Thank you Becca, for your time and appreciation

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 October 2017

They called him Veda Vyasa The Compiler of the Vedas The separation has bared the fruits. the child is blossoming into well mannered well versed sage. Indeed proud mother. Im enjoying reading. Waiting for continuity.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2017

Hi Aarzoo, I am elated to see you following this series. And for penning down your comments. How do I thank you! ! I have just posted two more poems in the series to show how grateful I am. Obliged..

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Wow. I was waiting to read satyawathi 8 Nice to hear abt Krishna as veda vyasa Really proud and lucky mother to have such a gifted child

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 October 2017

Thank you Rini...For your time and the sordid opinion. Your words prompt me to go ahead..Obliged, ..

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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