Satyawati -07 Comments

Thank you again for the Vocabulary- it helps me follow along better. One sleepless night, he said / We are leaving in the morn / On a pilgrimage, know not where / And when would we return- - Sometimes I think we leave on a journey not knowing where it will take us everytime we get up in the morning. Sometimes the day's journey is good, sometimes it is bad. 10 for this, Storyteller!

As always...... so eloquently written and yes... a piece that keeps you wanting to go on to the next :) - - -When we finally we returned I was able to forgive Parashar In spite of all he did to us And start my life afresh.- - - Full points here and beyond.

Very Heart Felt! ! ! ! ! Tearfully Powerful! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !

Time and Spirituality is the biggest healer The journey has helped her in coming to terms with reality... Glad she is learning to come to terms with life. One more beautiful write. Can't wait for next poem.

Good to hear that she was able start a new peaceful life and forgave that cruel sage, .. Enjoyed reading