Satyawati -04 Comments

The story of a great epic moves further, well wrote dear poet!

PART TWO- -Dang, this is such a turn-the-page story. I would love to see it published in book form with the kind of illustrations of your culture to drift into while reading this tale. oh,10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ on every chapter of course.

PART ONE....Oh, do take liberties with this tale.... I could feel the heroine of this story so much clearly through her memories of her remarkable and mysterious mother and a wise mother at that- -For, you yourselves are your best friend/And you are your worst enemy as well /Negative energy brings in disaster for you.'

- - - - Tears welled in my eyes I could hear my soul's cries. I could feel her presence by my side I wanted her aanchal for my face to hide.- - - - Wow, a young girl yearns for her mother during such a time. Countless women find themselves in similar state of mind when they're expecting. Beautifully written to the point of allowing the reader to envision and feel every line in this episode. Wonderfully written.100++++

Ever So Beautifully Told! ! ! ! ! Step By Step Word By Word, So Eloquently Painted! ! ! ! ! So Deeply Heard! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Superbly Penned! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Please read 'once' instead of 'onve', it has been inadvertently done.

Onve again I came to this poem in which the story of Satyawati, the great grand mother of Pandavas and Kourabas has been painted stunningly. Going deep into the poem I get clear picture of Satyawati's mother. Though she was a wife of fisherman yet she wasn't eating fish. She was pure vegetarian and pious lady. She knew sanskrit and taught Satyawati many slokas which put great impact upon Satyawati. Some lines may be quoted here... She had taught me read write and recite A few shlokas that I could as a little girl Satyam Vada, Dharmam Chara, she said Be truthful and tread the path of righteousness. Uddharet aatman aatmanam Na aatmanam avasadayet Aatmasya hi aatmano bandhu- Raatmaiva ripuraatmana. The love of her father and the affection of her past mother are being portrayed captivatingly. Many thanks dear ES for continuing the story.

Wonderful piece! I'm going on reading.

Love and care of father for his daughter and the upcoming child beautifully depicted.. Nice story

This is beautiful story poem very nicely and tenderly expressed that highlights qualities of womanhood...10