Satyam Shivam Sunderam Comments

Martelle Mcpartland I would break it up into stanzas to separate out the thought process. Title- Satyam Shivam Sunderam- First stanza - first four lines. Second stanza.-.next two lines. Third stanza - next four lines. Fourth stanza -last four lines.

Charles Darnell I do not know enough about the subject matter to respond except for the poem's structure. This is a list poem which appears to address religious concepts. Te only suggestion I can make is to omit so and create a second stanza beginning with The whole creation....

Nature is truth and together cover everything. Beautiful. Thank you.