Saturday Night But No Fever Comments

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Saturday Night But No Fever - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you''ve reawakened. Great verse, Poet! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Saturday Night But No Fever - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you''ve reawakened. Great verse, Poet! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - some wrote asa comment but who was he YOU? ?

This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you've reawakened. Great verse, Poet!

thanks you twoooooooooooooooooooo

I hear the silent laughter quickly get up faster pull the curtains aside as our only sun upon us does glide...very beautiful poem..very timely theme of emotional..//

clouds requested the sun to wait he now sleeps though late..///

the sun was peeping as scratching inner thighs kept me sighing..//

where in the garbage bin of time can we ourselves dispose early morning we all rose..//

week end is going to be dry Saturday and Sundays everything closed no surprise nothing to try..//

The current in my inner skin today does sting like sharply pointed ninety pins..//