Saturday Night But No Fever Poem by me poet yeps poet

Saturday Night But No Fever



The current in my inner skin
today does sting
like sharply pointed
ninety pins

week end is going to be dry
Saturday and Sundays
everything closed
no surprise nothing to try

where in the garbage bin of time
can we ourselves dispose
early morning we all rose

the sun waspeeping
as scratching inner thighs
kept me sighing

clouds requested the sun
to wait
he now sleeps
though late

I hear the silent laughter
quickly get up faster
pull the curtains aside
as our only sun
upon us does glide

Friday, July 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: boredom,fun,poem,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

I hear the silent laughter quickly get up faster pull the curtains aside as our only sun upon us does glide...very beautiful poem..very timely theme of emotional..//

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

The current in my inner skin today does sting like sharply pointed ninety pins..//

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

week end is going to be dry Saturday and Sundays everything closed no surprise nothing to try..//

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

where in the garbage bin of time can we ourselves dispose early morning we all rose..//

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Prabir Gayen 25 July 2020

the sun was peeping as scratching inner thighs kept me sighing..//

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2020

mnmnmnmnmmmmmmmmmmm , ., ., ., ..no point posting poems no comments get recorded ph is not bothered it seems techy foul could be so read older poetry

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 July 2020

Saturday Night But No Fever - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you''ve reawakened. Great verse, Poet! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 July 2020

Saturday Night But No Fever - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you''ve reawakened. Great verse, Poet! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - some wrote asa comment but who was he YOU? ?

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Mj Lemon 28 July 2020

This is brilliant, Poet...I detect a hint of 20th century Marxism- stanza three- and it fuses well with those old memories of John Travolta you've reawakened. Great verse, Poet!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2020

thanks you twoooooooooooooooooooo

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