Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Wednesday, June 3, 2009

~saturday Morning Mood Comments

Rating: 5.0

~ Saturday Morning Mood


In me lives a million tears
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Adeline Foster
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Liza Sudina 16 March 2016

This Wise poem shows your tears, deep faith in God, that he is the onlly one, and what He means to us and plans for us! A poem of my dream! And in His plan for everyone, He intended us to know The comfort of another’s love To ease our heavy load.

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Thomas Carolan 09 March 2014

Yes this is a lovely write, loneliness when deep inside I 'd like to stay. though I know that I must go. every day brings a different trump card,

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Abby Rose 16 July 2012

filled with such deep emotion makes you want to know the person

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Chitra - 17 January 2010

The inner mood personified through the inner voices. Universal in theme, deep and thought provoking!

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Afzal Shauq 09 January 2010

awesome..a sweet piece written professionally 10/10

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 08 October 2009

I enjoyed this poem so much...I appreciate this quiet voice of your heart. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Lillian Thomas 06 August 2009

You have a philosophical bent to you I see. But also this poem shows emotional depth that reverberates in the simple, straight-forward style. The ending is esp. strong, Thank you for sharing this jewel.

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Matt Mooney 19 July 2009

Thanks. Good to read you on a Sunday evening. Lovely poem to read and in some ways there were similar sentiments in my own. Sláinte!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 June 2009

This is not supposed to be only on Saturday mornin, butta, on every other day's mornin.Your concern about loneliness, friendships and love is also faced by others universally.We have to take stuff, one at a time.Well writes Adeline!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 June 2009

A wisdomful poem, expressed simply and nicely. Love shows the right path to everyone. The first and the last stanzas are really touching and encircle the mood of whole poem. This is the poetry which could help people. Best Regards Naseer

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James Mclain 03 June 2009

Your words are the path that boots the feet of all, the rock your word of which you are rolls up the mountain at the peak you speak in snow your rain to fall on all to hear...iip..short never does you justice...

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Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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