Saturday, October 14, 2017

Saturday Morning In Winter Comments

Rating: 4.8

Morning scratches at the glass.
and the screen glares back white.
Boiling water recalls the heat of thoughts,
a small bird lands on a branch of sunrise.
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Jette Blackstone
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Unnikrishnan E S 03 December 2021

Lovely poetry. Great original imagery. Reminds me of Great Poet Lorca's magnificent poems.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2017

A Very Deep And Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! !

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Jette Blackstone 30 November 2017

Thank you so much for your beautiful comments Rebecca! They are much appreciated.

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Sandra Feldman 26 November 2017

There are some poems, not many, mind you, that open the path to immortality. 'Saturday Morning In Winter' is one of them.

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Jette Blackstone 26 November 2017

Thanks Sandra...that's quite a comment I will be striving for the rest of my life to live up to. :) I am humbled. Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 26 November 2017

After all this well-deserved praise, Not much left to say, Don't want to be repetitive So, I'll tell you in my way, 'An immortal and great poem You have written on this day! ' It's just one of those forever poems, That will never go away, A touch of spirituality More than words can evev say.

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Valsa George 19 November 2017

You have not only changed your name but your style of writing too! Amazing write!

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Jette Blackstone 19 November 2017

Thank you Valsa! :)

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Susan Williams 13 November 2017

I cannot pick out a favorie line- I simply cannot.... but I can tell you those opening 4 lines are the best opening lines ever- - and the middle 4 lines are the best middle lines eve- - and the closing 4 lines are the best and hottest lines ever! ! ! ! ! As you can tell, I love this poem unconditionally. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and a place on my fav list

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thanks so much Susan....as usual...I love your commentary. It always brightens my day. Thank you. XOXO

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Lyn Paul 10 November 2017

A bright crisp write with interesting adjectives. Yes... beautiful for you to wake seeing great compliments.

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thanks Lyn. :)

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Moon Mist 10 November 2017

I enjoyed every stanza of this poem.

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

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June Dewhurst 10 November 2017

A lovely poem thst deserves its place in poem of the day.

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thanks for reading and commenting June. I appreciate your kind commentary.

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Stacy Geena 10 November 2017

We are privleged to see this poem.

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

You are too kind! Thanks Stacy. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 November 2017

Congratulations! This is a very nice poem. Great really...10

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thank you Kumarmani. I appreciate your 10! :)

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Harley White 10 November 2017

We- wrought refreshing images, inclusive of all the senses... Kudos for your poem of the day!

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Harley White 10 November 2017

Sorry... I meant to say well-wrought...

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thanks Harley. I appreciate your poetry as well. Thanks for commenting.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2017

My fingers freeze! ! Cold Weather. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thank you for stopping by and commenting Edward. Take care.

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Malcolm Two 10 November 2017

Thank you for sharing the poem with us, very nice

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Jette Blackstone 15 November 2017

Thank you Malcolm. I appreciate you stopping by and reading.

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 November 2017

great metaphors in a beautiful, lovely poem

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Jette Blackstone 14 November 2017

Thank u Fabrizio!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 November 2017

Enjoyed. Full of love and passion it is very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Jette Blackstone 10 November 2017

Thanks so much for reading Anil.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 November 2017

fingers freeze at keyboards, meaningful

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Jette Blackstone 10 November 2017

Yes. Thank you for reading my poem Gajanan.

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Michael Hopkins 10 November 2017

Congratulations on your poem of the day. Well written.

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Jette Blackstone 10 November 2017

Thank you Michael. Much appreciated. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 November 2017

Such a lovely write, Jette...10+++

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Tom Allport 10 November 2017

a wonderful descriptive poem of the feeling's felt on a cold wintery weekend morning? ...............well written Jette

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Jette Blackstone 10 November 2017

Yes. Thanks so much for reading and commenting Tom. :)

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