Morning scratches at the glass.
and the screen glares back white.
Boiling water recalls the heat of thoughts,
a small bird lands on a branch of sunrise.
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A Very Deep And Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! !
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments Rebecca! They are much appreciated.
There are some poems, not many, mind you, that open the path to immortality. 'Saturday Morning In Winter' is one of them.
Thanks Sandra...that's quite a comment I will be striving for the rest of my life to live up to. :) I am humbled. Thank you.
After all this well-deserved praise, Not much left to say, Don't want to be repetitive So, I'll tell you in my way, 'An immortal and great poem You have written on this day! ' It's just one of those forever poems, That will never go away, A touch of spirituality More than words can evev say.
You have not only changed your name but your style of writing too! Amazing write!
I cannot pick out a favorie line- I simply cannot.... but I can tell you those opening 4 lines are the best opening lines ever- - and the middle 4 lines are the best middle lines eve- - and the closing 4 lines are the best and hottest lines ever! ! ! ! ! As you can tell, I love this poem unconditionally. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and a place on my fav list
Thanks so much Susan....as usual...I love your commentary. It always brightens my day. Thank you. XOXO
A bright crisp write with interesting adjectives. Yes... beautiful for you to wake seeing great compliments.
Thanks for reading and commenting June. I appreciate your kind commentary.
Congratulations! This is a very nice poem. Great really...10
We- wrought refreshing images, inclusive of all the senses... Kudos for your poem of the day!
Thanks Harley. I appreciate your poetry as well. Thanks for commenting.
My fingers freeze! ! Cold Weather. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Enjoyed. Full of love and passion it is very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.10++++
a wonderful descriptive poem of the feeling's felt on a cold wintery weekend morning? ...............well written Jette
Lovely poetry. Great original imagery. Reminds me of Great Poet Lorca's magnificent poems.