Thursday, January 2, 2003

"Saturday At The Mall" Comments

Rating: 2.3

On arrival at the mall the husband
wishes his wife good shooping and
assures her that he will keep himself
amused. And then off to the giant
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Bob Lennon
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Zinc Truism 06 April 2005

Remember to spell-check...no rules in poetry, I know, but unless the wong spelling is part of the intent, it dilutes the intent.

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