Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Satisfaction (Acrostic) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Say you'll never leave me.
All my life be true.
Trust is the question.
Intuition is the answer.
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Brooke Peterson
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 October 2009

Ahhh..... 'la dame très bien faite et jeune....Simpatico now, indeed, both structurally & aesthetically! F j R

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2009

Nice acrostical penning, young lady....If i could make 1 suggestion for your consideration...remove the period points, and just parenthesize(Acrostic) next to the title...Readers will pick-up the alpha-pattern.Again...nice work! F j R

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Christine Schmidt 13 October 2009

oops guess it did go thru-no you have 3 comments :)

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Christine Schmidt 13 October 2009

OH, OH i just left a comment, but it didn't go through so here again-it's a heartbreaking acrostic poem...as i said in the unprinted one before you better go find that house :) -lots of emotion here! Good poem!

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Christine Schmidt 13 October 2009

oh, oh, heartbreak acrostic poetry....uh, you better go find that house ;) lots of emotion here-VERY NICE!

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