Thursday, December 6, 2012

Satire Comments

Rating: 5.0

beneath the sky, someone is craving for one
sitting besides the river, someone is longing for one
within the day, within the night, all aware
stars are in dilemma, whom I am searching for
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Vizard Dhawan
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Payal Parande 06 December 2012

beautiful.......i love it no need for more......

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Jahan Zeb 06 December 2012

Very imaginative and not easy to swallow. I liked it for you have kept your readers guessing or I should say you have left something for the readers to come out with. A nice poem like your nice name. Thanks for the title.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 December 2012

I love this poem. O poet Dhawan, congratulation. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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Asif Andalib 06 December 2012

Nice one. Keep on writing

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