Thursday, April 28, 2016

Satire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shall I compare thee to a thief?
You are more intelligent and more articulate:
Thieves get caught while performing their act,
You are artful and extemporate.
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M. Asim Nehal
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God has his own plans. His actions are unpredictable. You're amazing act drives everyone crazy. Many a time, in life's varied situations, one tends to feel like this. An interesting satire! Nehal ji, you fully deserve a full 10. Enjoyed reading.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 May 2016

Philosophical! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 28 April 2016

Satire is often a direct path to understanding true nature

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T Rajan Evol 28 April 2016

Intelligent writing, Asim. The metaphor thief is fantastic and the smarter one will defeat it. Life is not to steal anything but to live and enjoy with dignity and grace. This poem is highly philosophical with deep meaning hidden within.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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