Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Satiety Comments

Rating: 5.0

Satiety
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With every passing breath
Desiccated is my spirit and warmth
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 January 2015

Beautiful poem portrayed with mythological characters. Now wish to be carried on Upon the vehicle of Charon Still lot of time remains, to have a ride on vehicle of Charon. Beautiful presentation. Loved it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 07 January 2015

Deepakji, quite a savory treat from the Greek mythology. The vehicle of Charon shall of course come to greet each individual but should we eagerly await it? Here I am reminded of Dylan Thomas poem ' Do not go gentle into that good night, ' which conveys an opposite sentiment. However, this poem is a brilliant work and a good food for thought....10

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Valsa George 07 January 2015

It is not yet time to feel that satiety and to be ferried by Charon to the other world! The thread of life still lies at length and don't wish it to be cut by Atropos! A powerful write with multiple references to mythological characters! Enjoyed!

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