Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Satellite Feed Comments

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The jigsaw puzzle map
I have constructed with tiny hands
Shifting states to move you closer
Keep you tethered to my time zone
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Susan Lacovara
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Daniel Brick 20 September 2014

Your first poem I read tonight THINK OF ME ON THAT TRAIN appropriately hugged the earth in its imagery. This poem - from the early Space Age of satellites - with a similar sense of what's appropriate gives us aerial and space vistas. It has the same curious mix of calmness and impatience. You are the Queen of Images - they do your biding to create another layer of reality responsive to the heart's desires. To put it somewhat awkwardly but accurately, your imagined world is realer than the actual world, because it reveals how important that invisible factor of EMOTION is in every encounter.

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Anthony Burkett 19 September 2014

A delightful tribute to the power of love's remorse and longing... deeply emotional... bittersweet and charming in the same breath... touche my dear poetress friend... what a lucky man he must be...

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Gary H 17 September 2014

Nice, another good one with nice feelings.

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