Satan Was Waiting... Comments

Fortunately, there was no accident, I suppose at the end of the tunnel.

I enjoy thought prevocing poems... good write Kesav Regards Alf

beware - beware - beware - that's what this verses means.....10

Great accident averted. Refined expression.10

excellent! or SOBRESALIENTE!

a clever symbolic poem shared...well conceived thoughts...........10+++++

Lucky passengers! Are they? Can the Driver find out Satan's wait before the Green light burns? So many questions arise..........Truly a great poem; a poem that makes the readers think and gives rise to so many questions and end-options....This is what Ershad Muzamdar calls as a great poem.....

wonder why death has to be so dramatic sometimes...accidents and natural calamities make us question god...in this case after deputing satan god seems to have changed his mind...a story well told in just a few lines...great craft sir..10

Inadvertently, a devastation by devil avoided Haven’t we come across many such occasions? ? Your presentation of such a graceful incident Took my heart away to a land of intrepid, by fate. Let me by virtue of being a technocrat Mention a wit with which I compare SATAN – in computer terms… Security Administrator Tool for Analyzing Networks Not a devil…but Driver like the one in your poem May fail his intensions…and Network will fail… for sure....; -))

Kesav, this is so simple but deep and vivid idea well done poet luwi

meaningful poem to ponder upon................

keshavji, at the end of every tunnel, there is light...... the green light of nature... let her win... you do that through this poem...............

yes..... but sometimes decisions are to be made by ourselves.... deep poem. loved it. thank you.

a good driver is one who follows his good instincts.....

nirdai lakh chahe to kya hota hai, hota wohi hai jo manjure khuda hota hai. now Kesav, i dont know whether i quote correctly, but that's what i infer from your poem- metaphorical, wonderful vivid imagery to drive your point home. 10 Mamta

that's a good inference Raj...wise...and to the point...thanks

AS THE OLD SAYING GOES, THE HAND THAT SAVES IS GREATER THAN THE HAND THAT KILLS, WE KNOW! A MESSAGE FOR SATAN & THOSE FANATICS - HIS FOLLOWERS! 10 + -RAJ

Mark, you guessed it right...the train didn't move a bit for there was no Green Signal...thanks

I guess satan did not win. I believe, though Master's green did not appear, still the emergecy brakes stopped the train with no harm done. mark

yeah, very true, not even a leaf moves without His wish.........regards, sir jii.....