He held her still beating heart in his cold hands
His dark eyes appraising her body by the moon's gleam
Placing the heart in a wrought-iron box
He turned and walked away from the scene
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You possess impressive command of stanzaic structure, and overall structural movement...Darkside verse...my fav...Bet u like Poe & Stephen King! Stellar pening ~FjR~
Thank you, FjR. Yes, I am a huge fan. :)