Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Satan's Queen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every time I hit the town
A dozen faces turn around
Tonight we’ll dance then sleep ‘til dawn
Says the angel with the black dress on.
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PAUL COLVIN
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Shadow Girl 01 November 2011

haha! ! loved the twist and the end there...why so pessimistic? ? haha =)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 October 2011

Good rhyming. Try 'Swing High Swing Low' when you have a spare minute.

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Tsira Gogeshvili 26 October 2011

Wonderful 'With no receipt but perhaps a rash! '........10..... Tsira.

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Jacqui Broad 26 October 2011

I guess some people would sell their souls for pleasure. Great the way you write it, sir. Satan's queen: I pictured her in leather mini-skirts, chains around the waist, and hair wild.

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