Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Satan's Law Comments

Rating: 5.0

Betrayal walked
with crooked feet
in total secrecy,
surrounded by
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Scarlett Treat 23 May 2006

I wish that I had something clever to say that would ease your pain at 'betrayal on crooked feet, ' but I don't. Been there, done that! Betrayal never goes away - but it does get easier to live with!

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Gina Onyemaechi 23 May 2006

Yes, increasingly it seems that villains prosper while victims suffer. A succinct but strong poem. I'm just sorry that you're in it, Herbs. G.

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