Saturday, July 30, 2016

Satan Comments

Rating: 4.4

My God!
one may know You for any other reason,
but I know you for your kind and lovely returns,
yes, I'm a selfish man!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 04 August 2016

To be placed once more in the paradise with your Eve and no Satan to tempt you would be wonderful.... Enjoyed this lovely poem! A 10

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Loke Kok Yee 03 August 2016

A lovely thought, why not? thank you sir-10

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 August 2016

Beautiful lines... please throw us in another world, where there is no Satan. I just wonder will there be any world without Satan. Interesting write. Loved reading it.

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M Asim Nehal 31 July 2016

I have read The Satan by the great philosopher Khalil Gibran and your Satan is no lesser than that, The modern Satan is not only trying to deceive all of us by keeping busy in useless things but also creating hatred and provoking for war and competition.

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Rajnish Manga 31 July 2016

A very heartfelt prayer bridging the gap between a mythological past and the tiresome present. The prayer seeks longevity of love but without the role of Satan any more. Thanks a lot. Can you put me back in another paradise, with my Eve and your forbidden fruit?

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Khalid Saifullah 31 July 2016

A great thought nice poem.............................

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

How lovely would it be to not only turn back time, but live in a world free from evil

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