Friday, November 13, 2020

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Love was not aware
We snuck outside-
To a cool evening,
Cuddling and giggling.
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Bri Edwards 15 November 2020

line 7 I was not familiar with " vestured" , meaning clothed/dressed/clad. " Of this empty streets" I'd use " this...street" OR " these... streets" I don't know what you mean by " Love was not aware" . Could you mean one of both of 'you' were not aware " love" was 'in the air'? ? sashay: I've heard this word, but not for YEARS! :) to MyPoemList bri :)

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Kyvin Nash 24 November 2020

Thank you sir...the streets, instead of street might be wrong but I mean no one was around anywhere or everywhere, sometimes we brake rules to say what we want as poets, and love was not aware, means both were caught up in a moment love was also surprised

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