Sarpasatram 2- Parikshith Comments

It is not an easy task to render the stories of Mahabharat in English in one poem.You have done it excellently..

The saga of war n peace continues to become the saga of life and death. A gripping tale moving at a quick pace. A smooth flow of words, a perfect rhyme to narrate the grand incidents. Larger-than-life characters adorn the story. You have very skillfully narrated the events keeping rhythm n flow undisturbed. A 10

The story indeed continues. There is so many rich threads woven through your poem- it takes me on a journey through your country's heritage as well as through philosophy and psychology and artistry. The problem with writing these sagas? Your readers instantly want MORE PLEASE! ! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++