Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Saree And Thorns Comments

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If saree caught on a thorns
even gentle pull is damaging
hard snap will ripped apart.
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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blank blank 08 April 2011

interesting which will be damaged? the thorns or the saree?

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 March 2011

It is really a great poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. You have come out with the truth of human life. It's really a thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 March 2011

It was really a very good observation. You have described the truth in fewer words. No need to write a book on it. An extremely thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing...

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Malaya Roses 30 March 2011

Very effective words being used in this poem with multicultural understanding. Well done, my friend.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Ibnu Din Assingkiri

Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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