Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Sarah's Saturday Comments

Rating: 4.3

Like an egg, she felt complete, enclosed,
Protected, full of promise,
And yet, Sarah wondered, and yet.
Alive, alert, attractive, alone,
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Martin Swords
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Mary Gordley 06 February 2008

Very interesting. I love it when a writer discloses a little slice of what someones life might be. I've experiment with that too and consider your poem quite a success. Thanks.

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