Wednesday, January 13, 2021

Sarah, Lovely And Loving Comments

Rating: 4.9

Sarah, lovely and loving, offered
her hand, a simple hand, nothing
more. If her hand had held flowers,
or money, or food, I would smiling
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 19 February 2021

Dang! I was not quite finished with my comment, Daniel, when I got a message it was already sent? ! Oy! Anyway, you remind me with this how much a hand's touch can do and mean. -Glen

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Glen Kappy 19 February 2021

a hand's touch can do! What thrilling sensation it can send up an arm and into our hearts and minds! -Glen

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Lyn Paul 14 January 2021

Amazing heartfelt words that hold the meaning of life.

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Daniel Brick 17 January 2021

Thank you Liz for your wonderful assesment of my sonnet. Sonnets by Shakespeare and

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me poet yeps poet 14 January 2021

niceeeeee poemy now do read if u please MOM'S SMILES

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Richard Wlodarski 14 January 2021

So much more...indeed! Daniel, I think that you've reached what you've been striving for!

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kyvin nash 14 January 2021

Very deep...evoking emotions...Congratulations, brilliant piece!

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Bharati Nayak 13 January 2021

Sometimes I remain awestruck and think what to write about a poem like this which is so deep and soul searching.

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

This is discernment, my friend. A discernment many of us do not see nor feel. Dang, you're good. 5 star rating though that is a paltry rating for a poem of this magnitude. I favored it as well cuz I want to read this again and again to remind myself what a real poet is

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

You said---This sonnet was intended as an exercise in iambic meter but it became much----you are so right. This is so elegant and insightful and so filled with your talent more

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

First off, I went searching for you because I could not bear PH without your presence. So glad to see you are still here!

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Daniel Brick 13 January 2021

Susan I am blessed with your appreciation. It is so special and adds color, bright, shining, vivid color to my lifr.

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