Sarah, lovely and loving, offered
her hand, a simple hand, nothing
more. If her hand had held flowers,
or money, or food, I would smiling
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a hand's touch can do! What thrilling sensation it can send up an arm and into our hearts and minds! -Glen
Thank you Liz for your wonderful assesment of my sonnet. Sonnets by Shakespeare and
So much more...indeed! Daniel, I think that you've reached what you've been striving for!
Very deep...evoking emotions...Congratulations, brilliant piece!
Sometimes I remain awestruck and think what to write about a poem like this which is so deep and soul searching.
This is discernment, my friend. A discernment many of us do not see nor feel. Dang, you're good. 5 star rating though that is a paltry rating for a poem of this magnitude. I favored it as well cuz I want to read this again and again to remind myself what a real poet is
You said---This sonnet was intended as an exercise in iambic meter but it became much----you are so right. This is so elegant and insightful and so filled with your talent more
First off, I went searching for you because I could not bear PH without your presence. So glad to see you are still here!
Susan I am blessed with your appreciation. It is so special and adds color, bright, shining, vivid color to my lifr.
Dang! I was not quite finished with my comment, Daniel, when I got a message it was already sent? ! Oy! Anyway, you remind me with this how much a hand's touch can do and mean. -Glen