Friday, September 30, 2011

Sarah Comments

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Today is not a day for grieving,
Nor a day we should be sad,
For Sarah is with God in heaven,
And for that we should be glad.
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Gordon Jackson
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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2011

Oh that was so sad and sweet...She will having better place there, here so much hurtful thing may bruise her angelic smile..Let her keep the smile shine above, so we will see at same high maybe... :) Softly write and innocent in every lines make this poem be a great poem..juicy and concentrated with humanity and emotion..Good hand Gordon, so good :) _Unwritten Soul

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 October 2011

Great rememberance for Sarah.Poetic verses of commemorating a cameo life was immense from the bottom of your heart.May her soul rest in piece and may Christ bless this soul to find new accomodation once again in this big bad world. Shows your another side of a poet-of a doting father who mourns the loss of a girl child on behalf of those friends as a mouthpiece here.Brilliant and humanitarian-two viking landmarks for your poem..

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Dave Walker 30 September 2011

A beautiful poem for an angel.

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