Tuesday, March 17, 2015

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Jo sapne poorey ho nahin paen,
Palat palat kar ayen,
Aankhon se pani barsaen,
Dil mein aag lagaen,
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Amitava Sur 03 April 2015

An utter wish for fulfilling all the incomplete happenings in life, dreaming with such an eagerness! ! Very nice. I'd like to say.... Mostly the dreams remain in dreams only Then why you dreams come in my mind? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2015

Dreams which are not fulfilled should be fulfilled soon. Wonderful imagery within. Nice poem.10/10

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