Saturday, April 11, 2009

Sap-Rising Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sapling learns the work of trees
Is standing tall and pushing deep.
Its being, tall and maple,
Stabs the iris with a hue
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Sue Ann Simar 18 May 2009

I like the image of 'honey/ on rough cracking bark.' . In a way, this is a didactic nature poem. I like your writing best when you describe and the description carries the content. . SAS

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