Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Sanity Comments

Rating: 3.5

Glancing beyond the shiny stars
And seeing the earth as it is,
Learning more of the galaxy,
Exploring more the Milky Way
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Obed dela Cruz
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Joseph Poewhit 04 August 2011

Life is reality for sure.

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Efe Benjamin 29 January 2010

lovely write up and i like the idea, the imagery, symbol and everthing about this poem keep it up dear poet

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 November 2009

Obed, this is nice. Your idea 'bout telling lecture you'd got is so nice. Its own meaning is deeper than what it's written. Nice.

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Liyo Denorte 04 November 2009

in response: =) yeah, i would agree.. in my 'lay still and hush' we have this notion of getting lost like in your galaxy cause we're bound for infinity ayt? sail on, Liyo Denorte

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Obed dela Cruz

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