Friday, October 27, 2006

.sandy Toes Tickled Warm Or Home’s True Heart (Couplets) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sands of time, sands of home, and sands of love
Sing such lovely songs to my well traveled

Sandy toes tickled warm Caribbean
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Debora Short
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Duncan Wyllie 29 October 2006

This feels intact in its content and is quite a show, well done again Debora Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2006

YOU ARE TH'QUEEN OF COUPLETS, MY DEAR...IN FACT, I HAVE RECENTLY CONVERTED SEVERAL OF MY OLDER WORKS WHICH WERE STRUCTUED IN APROSESQUE, OR ESSAY FORMAT, INTO COUPLETS & IT JUST OPENED TH' POEM UP FOR ITS FULL WORTH TO BE EASILY READ....I LIKE THIS PIECE A LOT, DEBRA...A FINE JOB INDEED......'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F jR}

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